Once again I found myself sitting in the dark
Searching for the light, to guide me out this tunnel
the light was looking for me
In the stillness of my darkest night, it found me
So familiar, so clear
Reminding me that it had always been there
Waiting for me to be still
Hoping I would see it glistening and turn towards it
3-25-09
I don't like this one just yet but I don't know what to do with it either
2 comments:
April 13, 2009 at 6:29 PM
Why don't you like it? I like it a lot :)
April 13, 2009 at 9:33 PM
I don't like the flow, it's too wordy I think, to story like maybe...
Sitting in the dark
searching for the light
to be guided out
the light was searching
in the stillness of the darkest night
it found me
so familiar,
so clear
reminding me it had always been there
waiting for stillness
hoping to glisten
and be move towards
I don't know
but thnx :) I've hit a dry spell which is kinda good, it usually means I'm not depressed :)
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